Audio Story - I'm a Little Mermaid
- sydapril6
- Feb 13, 2019
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Ch. 13 Over the last quarter century digital storytelling has been applied to numerous contexts. What makes this possible is that human...
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Sydney, this story is really cute. (Even with the broken arm! 😝😜) I love hearing interesting stories from people's childhoods. I think you chose a very interesting story for this project. Well done. I liked your delivery, and the sound effects you chose. You described the scenes very well, especially the scene in the bathroom with all of the screaming.
In terms of constructive criticism, I would say try to slow down as you talk in future stories. It's sometimes a little hard to follow when people talk fast. Also, I would suggest making a few of the sound effects a bit quieter. The wave sound effect almost drowned out the narration in a few spots.
Just a few things…